It was another late evening when Himani texted
me, ‘suggest me a topic for a poem to write’.
“elaborate a bit”, I texted.
‘u know, smthng cute n probably a non living
thing rather’.
After having a thought over, I suggested, ‘a
pillow or a winter’s cap or a jacket’.
And finally, it was a pillow.
We both decided to write, and ya! She wrote it
much better.
Here’s mine.
I open my eyes and finds you
There, in my arms
Close to my chest,
Your touch like a chou,
Sweet, gentle and fluffy
Ur arms entwined with mine
Ur hand under my head
My legs been bent over your body
And there, u smile
And the lovely, words of puffing essence
Says aloud, please, a little long
Stay here, with me
And I smell your body
It scents like me
I just fill that scent into me
It forcibly shuts my eyes
And there, you give me another few
Minutes of life on the imagination carpet.
But sweetheart, I had to leave.
'Oh no please, don't go
Hug me once again
I can't be on myself here
Let’s once again lie
Close to each other
And travel to the effortless heaven'
But there, i leave you,
Miserable, crying
On the bed, alone
On the curvy sheets
I work the whole day
And finally gets, nothing
But the evidences to realization
That am nothing.
I have no good choice
Than to be there,
In your loving arms
I weep, my face ducked into your chest
I know, it feels a little warm there
With your body on me
But, its sooths more
When you place your hand on my forehead
And your eyes smiling the same
Ur body scenting the same
And you lie, motionless
With your head on my beating heart.
I rub my cheeks,
To and forth
U adjust yourself
We both make ourselves comfortable
And once again,
We have our mental silence
In each other arms
Hugging each other,
With bliss full happiness
And a sweet smile.
And, next morning,
Again you are there,
For me, in the spoon,
My puffy fluffy pillow.
This piece of art is really very sentimental...........
ReplyDeleteThe man is fabulous and crazy....
Thank you bro.
DeleteYou flattered me. ;)
I still couldn't find this poem for a pillow... except for the last line... eeee..
ReplyDeleteNot my issue.
DeleteI just wrote as i felt.
Rest is upon readers only. :)
Great blog
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Thanks a lot for this valuable feedback. :)
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ReplyDeleteYa sure! Plz proceed. Would be a pleasure to me. 😉
Deletegreat piece of writing,
ReplyDeleteand also your pillow was better than hers ;p ..
Thanks a lot for such nice words. Also, thanks for the cheer ;p
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