Wednesday 10 February 2016

A fine evening

I was on tryst
On a cheerful evening
Clouds heap upon clouds and darkens
My love, why you let me wait on these long, rainy hours?

Passers would pass by
Staring the flowers
And the glow on my face
Leaving me full of shame.

Have you hid yourself behind the bushes , my love?
Watching me eagerly waiting
Might be pleasing you.
But my dear love, come out now
Come before these flowers loose its fragrance
Come before these petals sheds.

14 comments:

  1. wow, an incomplete awesomeness....

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  2. Dulcet👌........but without climax???

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    1. It's intentionally kept incomplete.. frame it the way you wanna .... it will only reflect you.

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  3. Awsome work my friend....:) Don't worry he'll come for sure..:P Keep it up ;)

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  4. Ahmm ahmm.....
    himani I would lyk to complete it :p

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    1. For sure, please proceed... i would be glad to read ..

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  5. ohho...it seems a nice fragment of awesomeness... :p

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    1. I don't know if its a fragment of awesomeness,
      Or a flower, which is just blossomless,
      Its just my heart typed down in words,
      Or just my hopes skywards.
      Well, thanks a lot.

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  6. the way i seek it,
    well thankyou, for giving back my state of mind,

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