Monday 2 November 2015

The 7-Word Poem

Whatsoever we see,
It's not always there.
Whatsoever we feel,
It is always fake.
Whatsoever we care,
Actually it's all nothing.
Whatsoever troubles us,
It's only our mind.
Whatsoever we enjoy,
It's just an hallucination.
Whatsoever our age,
We'll always die young.
because,
Whatsoever we are,
We are not real.
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  1. Unknown25 November 2015 at 19:26

    Hey buddy! Are you sure about these lines..... But these are some wonderful words for scientists, lolz......��

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  2. M. Sandhu29 November 2015 at 21:24

    Am I sure?! Poetry is merely a point of view. So, there can be infinite worlds within the same.
    Talking about science. Science is the study of the world we live in whereas on the contrary, poetry is the description of the same world in one's own words. So, its a possibility that the study and description may match at some words, but again, not for all.
    So, its ur life, design your own course, and live it to heights. Stand at a point, and have fun of living it there, and looking at it in entirely different shape from anyone existing in any of the parallel universes existing, including ours, taking any arbitrary point as the point of reference, so, who knows what are you watching, as no one else can be there(According to science, my dear).

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  3. Unknown30 November 2015 at 21:21

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    1. M. Sandhu1 December 2015 at 13:32

      Might be.
      Who knows!

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    2. Unknown1 December 2015 at 20:56

      The popular believes divert one's original thinking, I like no alteration to harsh as well as awesome reality.......

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    3. M. Sandhu1 December 2015 at 22:36

      Everything we know, is everything we have learnt.
      So, if you peek deep into life, you'll find it fascinating, that this entire life which you had, the number of your original thoughts you had in your mind, will actually reduce to zero, cuz whatever will come into your head, will either be taught, or learnt by you, or might be one or the another form of the thoughts of other people, nearby you or who once existed.
      So, everyone is just the part of that thought cloud where everyone is integrated and connected by a line where each member just differs by a bit of an idea, being influenced by the life they had been through.
      So, no offence. :)

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    4. Unknown2 December 2015 at 02:08

      Bro, nice opinion, specially the first half, lets kick the A of world and do whatever we wish which makes us happy, coz in my views, 'zindagi na milegi dobara'
      Regards

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    5. M. Sandhu2 December 2015 at 12:44

      Thanks for the praise.
      And all the best for your life,
      but be sure you don't kick it too harder, it might get you into trouble.
      Tada!
      Later.

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